A poem so bad it will depress you all

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A poem so bad it will depress you all

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i feel sorry for your eyes right about now
not so much a poem but a burial...man, my humor is cryptic right about now..haha
i haven't posted a poem in a while....i figured you all needed a break from my devastation


My Thruth

At the age of 21 years
I have never seen a girl
look at me and witness
even an ounce of beauty
I have grown used to this game
I do not even expect interest anymore, ever
I am but a cold body
that dies between the girl
and her man of choice
blue sky in the velcro
my name is matt, but you can call me regis
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Post by lizzytysh »

Dear Matt ~

It's a very interesting and touching way you've chosen to express your feeling invisible with women.

~ Elizabeth
Ben Kelly

Post by Ben Kelly »

Thruth is a rather nasty irritating vaginal condition and if you or the girl you desire is suffering from this then it is not surprisng perhaps that there was no romance



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Post by Woodsman »

Matt,

Although I wouldn't try this in public, try using the words "hey kitty, kitty here". If that doesn't work then I would try thrusting some poetry on them, or it.

Maybe it was "trusting" something? I don't remember.

Yeah, it was trusting.
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Post by Woodsman »

Okay Matthew, I'm sorry.

I must be depressed, I must.
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