Awakenings

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George.Wright
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Awakenings

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When this dark sensual veil has lifted from my tired eyes
and i can see the vibrant colours again, free from conditional surprise
looking at the world again, like a child would see
colours, vibrance and geometrical shapes all free
the majestic mansions of my dreams become clear
and all the values i thought i could hold dear
flitted over the hills on gossamer wings
the bells in my subconcious did start to ring
and the polygons of life began to take shape
and i began to devoid my heart from hate
stripped of false values, the world began to take shape
a garden of Eden that was empty of genetically modified apes
this world is now ours, not exclusively mine
not to just remain the domain of the divine
Georges
I am a right bad ass, dankish prince and I love my Violet to bits.
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Post by lizzytysh »

I like this one, Georges.
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Post by George.Wright »

Thanks, Liz. I feel that my poetry has come on better, since my rest in Corfu and my fatefull meeting with Ben kelly, who has inspired with more focus, aspects of my work. The poems are flowing more freely and with a better understanding.
Georges
I am a right bad ass, dankish prince and I love my Violet to bits.
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Dear Lord, please spare us from this.
I might even contemplate believing in you.
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As a heretic, Heretic, which particular Lord would that last comment have been addressed to?
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Post by lizzytysh »

:lol: Linmag ~ Good call.
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Post by George.Wright »

Heretic, my good chap
you should believith
it may allow you out of your firey lake.........into the cold
you may then be known as ...........
The heretic who came in from the cold
Haven't seen much of your sarcastic postings masquarading as intellectual
snippets lately
It seems my poem may be turning you almost human again Heretic
Take another tablet of fire with a glass of petrol!!
Adieu.............Georges
ps I thought that you did not bother looking at the poetry crap, still, once a liar always one.......................
I am a right bad ass, dankish prince and I love my Violet to bits.
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Post by Ben Kelly »

Dear Geogres

Euclid elements are hip
Euler differentials equations trip
All the scalar, vectors and tensors
From Stokes Gauss and Green
And Klein Bottle in Topology
Have no Shape in art
Like the poetry of the Heart

This is really good, please join my mathemathical poets group

Ben
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Post by George.Wright »

Thank you, Ben, I an honoured...........
Georges
I am a right bad ass, dankish prince and I love my Violet to bits.
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