Pity

[Everett Wade]

Late at night,
When the wind sings like rustling wet leaves
Trying to dry themselves in the cold
Someone tells me something,
And although I understand
I would very much like not to.
Maybe you will understand this
Sometime, late at night
When the stars in the sky
Speak to the sick light of the pale street lamps
And the rising mist takes pity
On drifting cigarette smoke caught in the wind.
Maybe you will understand, but if not...
I will try not to reach too far in expecting.

[lizzytysh]

Hi Ev,
I really like a lot of your images, and your using them to express your thoughts as you do. I sincerely trust that you will continue with your writing endeavours. When you're writing like this at 16, the future looks wonderful for the progress of your writing. Keep it up!
~Lizzytysh

[Everett Wade]

thanks lizzy, you are too kind.. =)
Ev

[lizzytysh]

Hi Ev,

RE: #4 ~ Right.

RE: This one ~ Sometimes, perhaps; however, right on target this time.
Just keep putting those ideas, thoughts, and words on paper.

~Lizzytysh

[smile]

very meaningful and interesting

[George.Wright]

Good piece of writing, keep it up!!!!
Georges

[solongleonard]

Dear Mr Wade, I am so sorry that you didn't get all your ducks in a Roe