Evolution

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Sat May 24, 2003 3:45 am

two skips past your face
and the common thoughts of all the human race
laid out like gutted mackrel
a rainbow of time and space
and the primeval time
when day was night and night was all
when the dreaming became flesh
before the fall
we all merged into one
and one was all
and we all shared the thought
that signified the cross
and the matrix of loss
and the conversion of St Paul
the infinity of it all
and the horror was faced
and from mystics engraced
the three points of inversion
and enemy incursion
and the shroud of suspicion
that embalmed it all
Georges

magneticcry · Post by **magneticcry** » Fri Jul 25, 2003 11:23 pm

goosh!somehow i begin to read your poems over and over,they really give a lot to think about !
seemes like you like the theme of developing and creating....
but that is good,cause the world wouldn`t be the same without changes....

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Sat Jul 26, 2003 3:41 am

Dear Magneticcry, you have got my drift. Many others have not.
Thank you for your comments, I have hope now to write more, for if i can touch one...................
georges

magneticcry · Post by **magneticcry** » Sat Jul 26, 2003 11:27 am

that would be so great,i`m already looking forward to your new poems

i think they`re one of the bests !

greta · Post by **greta** » Sat Jul 26, 2003 11:34 am

I wouldn't like to repeat magneticcry and so far i have tryed not to.. but we are very similar and i like your poems as much as magneticcry does...
I guess i'm not that in giving comments but i'd just like to say that yor really di touch me with your poems.
sometimes the extra words are just unnecessary...

magneticcry · Post by **magneticcry** » Sat Jul 26, 2003 12:06 pm

oh,greta!do you really think that we are so similar? woooow...it`s nice then

tom.d.stiller · Post by **tom.d.stiller** » Sun Jul 27, 2003 7:52 am

Welcome to the forum, greta & magneticcry...

Maybe I'm a bit late, bit it's still "straight form the heart". You just were as active in posting as I could only hope "newbies" to be. (Just a few days that I was overloaded with work, and I had to read so many new articles... This forum really is "buzzing" - thanks to people like you.)

Thank you. And please: Keep on!

Tom

magneticcry · Post by **magneticcry** » Mon Jul 28, 2003 7:46 am

ok

we`ll try to be ...
and thanks to all those interesting poems and questions etc ...we`ll have a lot to think about and to answer to !!!