today is for september

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Manna
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today is for september

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september's fire
is in a brand new pink fist today
never quenched

blood returns to cheeks
well done, today, well done
Alan Alda
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This is more a riddle than a poem (I think).

1. Someone just had a baby.

2. Bulbs planted last fall are now in bloom.

(my two best guesses)

L.
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well done Laurie, you're right on both counts. Though it was entirely made up. I don't know anyone who just had a baby.
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Manna wrote:september's fire
is in a brand new pink fist today
never quenched

blood returns to cheeks
well done, today, well done
is this about a new baby and also about bulbs emerging?
yeah, well, errrrm, hum, yeah, ok, I dunno, articulation is not my fing, who cares, SHUT IT YOU MUPPET, blah blah blah
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You just don't know how refreshing it is to see a poem* not based on ones' personal philosophy/life experiences/etc. Thanks Manna.

*poem/riddle
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Re: today is for september

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Sideways wrote: is this about a new baby and also about bulbs emerging?
sorry, no.
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It sounds like somthing from Nostordamas????
Please tell us what it means, Please!!!!
This is killing me.
We’ve all come to
This moment
To find out
Who we are.
Painted colors
Scribed words
Sweetly found.
~Gully~
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Alan Alda wrote:This is more a riddle than a poem (I think).

1. Someone just had a baby.

2. Bulbs planted last fall are now in bloom.

(my two best guesses)

L.
my best guesses too, i said no to sue bc i was picking on "her".
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