Authenticity

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daka
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Authenticity

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Authenticity

I was wondering why
I often think of you
After all these years
Now that all the pain
And dreams have disappeared.
It's not about the romance
Or the sensuality
I am not so hungry
Nor am I lonely.
When you come to mind
I can feel
The magnetic force
Of your being,
An inviting absence
Of a person or persona,
Of self image,
No sign of any class
Middle high or low,
I can safely touch your caste
And tumble into
Your authenticity.
In your world
There's room enough
For me.

Sean
If you don't become the ocean you will be seasick every day....Jikan (aka Leonard Cohen)

It's comin' from the feel that this ain't exactly real, or it's real, but it ain't exactly there! . Jikan
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Re: Authenticity

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Daka,

Bet you I know why. You are connecting with an authentic place within yourself,
though longing could also be playing a part in this.
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Re: Authenticity

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Hello Steven

Thanks for your response.

Longing for, admiring, and aspiring to her authenticity, I think sums it up. I wish I could say that I have attained her degree of authenticity, but I can only confess to aspiration presently.

Sean
If you don't become the ocean you will be seasick every day....Jikan (aka Leonard Cohen)

It's comin' from the feel that this ain't exactly real, or it's real, but it ain't exactly there! . Jikan
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Re: Authenticity

Post by Steven »

Hi Daka,

Thanks for your response. We each do the best we can, with regards to
authenticity, etc. That's all we can do.
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