A humble writing

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KjeXXXer
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A humble writing

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Hello, fellow Cohenites. I apologise for my absence, and I hope you are all well.

This was ritten today, and offered now with both humility and self-confidence at once.
Please have a look at it, and :) imagine it being recited by LC in the Dear Heather style.

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As before me comes a goddess to speak many words of many things
Her words pass me as I am washed away in her deluge
Her beauty is unparalleled and she is radiant beyond anything
you will ever see

It appears that she changes ceaselessly into various forms of herself
As I watch her venturing from light to darkness and back, her words start to seep in
She speaks of a revelation she had as she wandered her heavens in deep thoughts
Her vision was one that was new to her, and it filled her perfect form with wonderment
She said she had seen that we were to be
and forever to walk side by side

She said she was puzzled by this decree from the very ether of being
When last we met she saw me as only another journeyman lost
And now she is here and she will never leave and that very concept fills me with alarm
For this cannot be true, I have not yet atoned perfectly for my crimes
She says not to bother myself with it, I must stay beside her
and she will ease my trials

And her brilliant light erases every last grain of the doubt I have harbored
And my path now is illuminated by the splendor of her shimmer
and the radiance of her undying love.
Now you've got the gist of what my lettuce meant.
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i like your vision
love is not forgotten......
KjeXXXer
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Thank you sir! Glad you enjoyed it.
Now you've got the gist of what my lettuce meant.
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