set me free

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jimbo
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set me free

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could someone
help
me.
set me free
my dog
cant talk
and ye cant see

freedoms
singing
in my ears
what could be
my final song
cant take
no more

cant play
no more
love is not forgotten......
Cate
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Re: set me free

Post by Cate »

I wish I had advice.
I wish I had words that could make your pain feel less.
I'm trying to think of something - everything I think of just sounds like a cliche.
Words are just tools so I'll use a cliche because I mean it - Hang in there James - I know things seem dark, this is a hard time of year for you - If you need to call someone, call them.
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Re: set me free

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i m ok Cate iwas
just rehearsing
my Epitaph

but it would be beter
to hang in there
rather than up there

thank you for caring
love is not forgotten......
lightedpalace
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Re: set me free

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someone wise said this once, and i guarantee it was not me (i'm not wise. not even a little bit)

"if you find your self in hell
keep going."

soon the sun will spend more time
occupying sky's vacancy.
the ice will begin to melt
and rivers will begin to break their way through cracks
in the sidewalk
and dandelions will take root in the road
and we will all breathe
a little deeper.
"It's coming like the tidal flood beneath the lunar sway;
imperial, mysterious, in amorous array...
"
lazariuk
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Re: set me free

Post by lazariuk »

lightedpalace wrote:someone wise said this once, and i guarantee it was not me (i'm not wise. not even a little bit)

"if you find your self in hell
keep going."
In another thread here someone quoted Emily Dickenson as saying
parting is all we know of heaven
and all we need of hell
Everything being said to you is true; Imagine of what it is true.
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