Afternoon and evening approaching Christmas

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William
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Afternoon and evening approaching Christmas

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Afternoon and evening approaching Christmas.

I acquiesced. The voice from the twilit radio said:
‘The Christmas we get we deserve.’
Later, on a bitter but unseasonable line,
we watched the evening burst and shine.
Being cynical and eclectic, I chose
- without hope and God knows
why – a kind of perfect greeting
which, like love, loses in repeating.
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damellon
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Re: Afternoon and evening approaching Christmas

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William
I can't make head nor tale of this. Sorry.
You only have to let the soft animal of your body
love what it loves.

from Wild Geese
Mary Oliver
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Jimmy O'Connell
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Re: Afternoon and evening approaching Christmas

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There is something here. What it lacks, I think, is context. Needs more... there's a germ of something...

Jimmy
Oh bless the continuous stutter
of the word being made into flesh
-The Window-
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