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- Mon Feb 08, 2010 9:57 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: When we are old
- Replies: 3
- Views: 701
Re: When we are old
I really like the imagery involving the tapestry.
- Mon Feb 08, 2010 9:55 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: The Legitimacy of Intimacy
- Replies: 0
- Views: 244
The Legitimacy of Intimacy
I'm having conversations with the past, and it's clear Otherwise I don't think I'd listen by The face of your dear fear I know for a man like me It will take more than three months To rebuild this temple Jesus Christ only needed three days To rebuild His I've met the past in person Many times throug...
- Fri Jan 22, 2010 7:39 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Fire
- Replies: 10
- Views: 1281
Re: Fire
I think I'll do the same! I really couldn't be happier that you've found that much to contemplate from just two lines. This is my goal/ purpose, and is what motivates and encourages me to write.
- Fri Jan 22, 2010 4:02 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Fire
- Replies: 10
- Views: 1281
Re: Fire
Thank you so much, Juan. You're words are extremely encouraging. The first two lines are very controversial, I know. In order to carry the meaning that they do, Love and Jealousy must be looked at in more narrow terms. The meaning for Love that I decided to use was the pure affection and happiness t...
- Thu Jan 21, 2010 6:50 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Consequences of this Fortuitous Meeting
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1518
Re: Consequences of this Fortuitous Meeting
"After a day of worry, Pacification and rage I lay sleepless Anxiety coiling in my muscles" Waking up to weeks Without you Wearing Time's scars and Your distance Like an outcast lepor" Who still feels the phantom weight Of your leg over my thigh And the warmth of your hand Pulling awa...
- Thu Jan 21, 2010 6:38 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Fire
- Replies: 10
- Views: 1281
Re: Fire
I think I'll invest it in Google, they're stocks have been on a pretty steady rise for the past few months. As far as yesterday being a cancelled check? I'm calling the IRS.
- Wed Jan 20, 2010 3:18 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Fire
- Replies: 10
- Views: 1281
Re: Fire
Investment in it? I've got some decent stocks and mutual finds in Time 

- Sat Jan 16, 2010 10:14 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Consequences of this Fortuitous Meeting
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1518
Re: Consequences of this Fortuitous Meeting
carm, would you mind reading my piece Fire, and telling me what you think?
- Sat Jan 16, 2010 10:02 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Consequences of this Fortuitous Meeting
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1518
Re: Consequences of this Fortuitous Meeting
"After a day of worry
Pacification and rage
I lay sleepless
Anxiety coiling in my muscles"
Waking up to weeks
Without you
Wearing Time's scars and Your distance
Like an outcast lepor
(I hope you didn't mind me changing the format! It just made it easier for me to add)
Pacification and rage
I lay sleepless
Anxiety coiling in my muscles"
Waking up to weeks
Without you
Wearing Time's scars and Your distance
Like an outcast lepor
(I hope you didn't mind me changing the format! It just made it easier for me to add)
- Fri Jan 15, 2010 8:11 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Fire
- Replies: 10
- Views: 1281
Fire
Love has no ugly side Jealousy has no beautiful side I'm gonna talk really slow So every spinning word Makes perfect sense On this sensual carousel Of love and desire She wastes her time with me Because I create moments out of thin air. While every second goes by I make the universe get a little wid...