Hi Lazariuk. Thank you so much for your comments. I have tried to correct it now.
This is my first time in this forum and many people have already commented on my poems and I like it:-)
Thanks

Thank you Lizzie and Lion of lions for your comments. I will correct my spelling later.
Thanks!

Thank you so much. I will correct my spelling later. Thank you!

feelings so long and tough that they could embrace the eart several times I could put just one of them in the sky and it could make faces to God himself feelings so many and pale that they could shadow the moon and make her forget about herself I could roll one of them around the sun and the world w...

with my mouth
full of love
and eyes full of tears
I had to tell you
that you no longer
was my lover

with the mouth
full of silence
and your eyes
full of anger
you slapped me
one time or two
until you fell down

but your fall
is deeper
than you ever
will see
that is why
my friend
that is why

the world tips over in darkness
and I love you
only because you can
tip over my world
and pretends that
nothing has happend

my world tips over in darkness
whenever you are near
and I completly forget
who I am
and who is my dear

the world is blowing through me
invisible as a drop
I stand and fall from the one side
to the other

the world is blowing through me
and the only thing I try to hold on to
is myself

my love for you
fell a few degrees
or more

the one before
so burning devotion for you
are now
decreased into a little
chilly knot

that is why
I had to disappear
disappear into
the arms of my freedom
again

that is why
my friend

Hi!

I am just getting inspired by LC when I write I heard the song "Anthem" when I wrote the poem, but I am afraid that my translation from danish to english is bad, but I do my best.
I am danish and it is difficult to tranlate my poems into english, I think

I was born in your chains, mother you chained me to your love and took it from me again and again as a free I was filled up with bad conscience and as chained I was torned by unbearble pain your eyes had two faces one drunk and angry the other lovely and gentle I was born in your chains, mother you ...

Sylvia you are the silent scream of my heart a silent note commit to paper where you dance around like in an eternal ecstasy so lonely and alone you are until you just fade out og looses the black ink the only thing you ever owned and had invisible like a tear you run down the stairs of life and rig...

You were a child of the white snow and a chilly majestic form torned you out of your world and told you a secret allready as a child you were confident with the burdens of the adults which weighed down your mind and left a black hole in your soul you are a child inside but on the outside an adult og...