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by marilyn
Tue Oct 12, 2004 1:49 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: additional to "The Invitation"
Replies: 4
Views: 777

Ta, Lizzytish.
Cheers, Marilyn :)
by marilyn
Mon Oct 11, 2004 1:40 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Oh, Wretched Clock!
Replies: 6
Views: 1197

Luke,
would you do the honours? I'm a novice at writing but it sounds like a wonderful idea. I doubt that I could do it justice.

Cheers
by marilyn
Mon Oct 11, 2004 1:30 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: additional to "The Invitation"
Replies: 4
Views: 777

Luke, thanks for the comments. I think your verse very clearly portrays how some people have done it. Yourself perhaps? I too have been there but in retrospect not sure how close to the edge i've stepped. At the time I thought I was on the brink but now I think I could perhaps have gotten a little c...
by marilyn
Sun Oct 10, 2004 4:26 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: additional to "The Invitation"
Replies: 4
Views: 777

additional to "The Invitation"

For anyone out there who has read "The Invitation" by Oriah Mountain Dreamer....I've penned an extra verse which I thought was the only element she neglected when writing the original. As I get older, and hopefully a whole lot wiser, I'm pretty sure I'll think of others too. Anyone got any...
by marilyn
Sun Oct 10, 2004 3:39 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Oh, Wretched Clock!
Replies: 6
Views: 1197

Thanks

Thanks you guys (Lizzytysh and Laurie) for reading and commenting, especially since they were both favourable. This is the first time I've written in this style and a friend suggested I put it up here. Its actually the first time Ive publically displayed anything Ive written. I'm encourage to contin...
by marilyn
Sat Oct 09, 2004 5:45 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Oh, Wretched Clock!
Replies: 6
Views: 1197

Oh, Wretched Clock!

Oh wretched clock. Thou dost deny me that magic place twixt sleep and wake. Without thee the morning bird doth make this division by gentle song, so heart-warming and happy to wake upon. The night's slumber exchanged for semi-wakefullness, where magnificent events are recalled, where plans for futur...

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