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No Need For Concern
Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 5:42 pm
by lazariuk
Don't be too concerned
when this heart starts crying
That's how it is
for the newly born
Re: No Need For Concern
Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 9:22 pm
by Steven
Jack,
A nice poem, succinct and pregnant with possible inferences (for readers to think
about).
Re: No Need For Concern
Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 1:21 am
by William
Steven
Surely it's more post-natal than pregnant!
(My little joke)
A lovely piece Lazariuk
Re: No Need For Concern
Posted: Sat Dec 29, 2007 12:27 pm
by daka
succinct poetic genius, Jack
daka
Re: No Need For Concern
Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 6:53 am
by lightedpalace
Jack, this is beautiful on many levels. It hit me like the sound of cathedral bells in the morning.
Re: No Need For Concern
Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2008 2:52 am
by lazariuk
lightedpalace wrote:Jack, this is beautiful on many levels. It hit me like the sound of cathedral bells in the morning.
I'm thinking of changing it to
Don't be too concerned
when this bread starts baking
That's how it is
for the newly warmed.
The sound of the bells reminded me of the bread making I do.
Re: No Need For Concern
Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2008 2:54 am
by lightedpalace
*laughing*
that's much better! why speak of hearts and birth when one can enjoy baked goods, fresh from the oven of the immortal kitchen?!
Re: No Need For Concern
Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2008 6:20 am
by jimbo
[quote=
Don't be too concerned
when this bread starts baking
That's how it is
for the newly warmed.
The sound of the bells reminded me of the bread making I do.[/quote]
Jack the baker
putting buns in the oven
thats how his spirit wakens
to the dawn of life
Re: No Need For Concern
Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2008 6:31 am
by lightedpalace
jimbo wrote:[quote=
Don't be too concerned
when this bread starts baking
That's how it is
for the newly warmed.
The sound of the bells reminded me of the bread making I do.
Jack the baker
putting buns in the oven
thats how his spirit wakens
to the dawn of life[/quote]
you guys are both totally bizarre! <3