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To love Someone

Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 6:03 pm
by jimbo
To love someone
Whos gone from you
Theres no way back
And their love was true

he lost his mind
It wasnt you,
He had the crack
Your feelings flew,

The women loved
The hyper man
He wasnt mad
But never dalmed

He drank a pint
from dawn till morn
was never drunk
and played the horn

I see it all
now looking back
The reckless fall
to maniac...

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Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 12:52 pm
by Boss
Jimbo,

I guess you are the man in your poem. Losin' your girl is a shitful thing. Sometimes writing to an audience
is the only way you can alleviate the pain. Maybe your audience gets sick of ya', maybe not.
You still love her? Go for it mate. What have you got to lose except a sorry dependence on what
other people think. What can it hurt? Call her mate.

In peace,
Adam :)

Re: To love Someone

Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 5:43 pm
by jimbo
thanks boss/have you got a direct line to Heaven......??

Re: To love Someone

Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 10:53 pm
by Boss
I'm sorry Jimbo, I don't.
I am sorry

Good Christmas, hey

Boss

Re: To love Someone

Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 7:59 pm
by jimbo
no problem Adam.were still on the same side( pax tecum)

Re: To love Someone

Posted: Mon Dec 24, 2007 5:38 am
by mat james
thanks boss/have you got a direct line to Heaven......??
I did have, but the "combine" disconnected me.
That's life.

Re: To love Someone

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 4:06 am
by jimbo
thats the beauty of it

you can reconnect dude

Re: To love Someone

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 7:31 pm
by LauraL
Hi Jimbo ,

Losing someone you love is so painful , for me words fail.
My husband died suddenly and for years it's too been too raw to even grieve.
That empty aching void , a loss of something as simple as warm breath on your shoulder , being held as you drift into sleep.





In dreams

again

you are there ,

my loves gentle embrace.

Re: To love Someone

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 8:14 pm
by jimbo
I cant wait to die
when ill meet my mother
but i must wait my turn
and suffer a little longer

Re: To love Someone

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 8:47 pm
by lizzytysh
The genuineness and realness of your response to Jimbo moved me, Laura. I'm sorry to hear of your own deep and raw loss. I hope your own poignant poem brings you comfort as much as it gives tribute to your love.

Thank you for sharing this with us.


~ Lizzy

Re: To love Someone

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 8:49 pm
by lizzytysh
Dear Jimbo ~

I see that your mother's loss is still very painful for you. When they say it takes time, they mean it, don't they.


~ Lizzy

Re: To love Someone

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 9:03 pm
by jimbo
Im ok with with it now
I only have good memories
of her hugs and kisses
and tucking me into bed

thank you Liz and Laural