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drop of Love

Posted: Fri May 16, 2003 3:38 am
by Iubita
If you feel alone
go outside and see
the very near tree.
There a small drop
as my tear
is gliding onto
a maple leaf
and trying
to disappear...
Look at the trace
and memorize its
very strange way
And if you touch it
with love and say:
"Where is My Dream? Where?"
I am coming soon
to remind you anew
how easy your dream
can become true...

Posted: Fri May 16, 2003 1:21 pm
by tom.d.stiller
Beautiful... Very sad, but at the same time filled with a warm hope... I like this poem.

Welcome to the forum, Iubita. Please feel at home, and post more like that...

Tom

Posted: Sun May 18, 2003 12:55 am
by John the Shorts
Shwmae Iubita

Welcome to the forum.

JTS

Posted: Mon May 19, 2003 7:08 pm
by lizzytysh
Hi Iubita ~

Welcome to the Forum. The image of a tear falling onto a maple leaf evokes an even deeper kind of sadness. Seeking comfort in nature is something many of us do during our sad and lonely times. It brings to mind some of the feelings I've had when I've gone there.

~ Lizzytysh

thank you, friends...

Posted: Wed May 21, 2003 3:39 am
by Iubita
hello,
It was very nice to see your letters...this's given me a sign that someone is there with me...exactly what I need...nobody likes to feel lonely... :D
thanks a lot, friends...