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Faceless creatures.
voiceless words.
Empty spaces.
edgeless swords.
hurtful silence.
of flightless birds,

falling drowning.
on the tide.
Jesus save me.
want to hide.
loveless people,
I will abide.

fearful moments.
sleepless night.
Devils dancing
round my heart.
candle burning.
burning bright.

Your poem says a lot to me, Jimbo. It's amazing how much can be spoken in series of two-to-three word lines.

Thanks for putting it here.

I'm glad to see that your heart is still brightly burning, steadfastly refusing to let alternate spirits extinguish your light. The world isn't loveless and you're part of the proof.

Hang in there, buddy . I have a full box of wooden, kitchen matches if you ever need one.


~ Lizzy

Thank you Lizzy.and ill light a candle for you too.

You understand my writings so well.not just me but everyone.
who posts here, on their level.you have amazing communication skills.what a gift..................

regards James