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My room of lite

Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:58 pm
by jimbo
Could I .
learn to love.
Again,
my flower gone.
My mind returned,

I searched the kitchens.
the smoky dens,
I prayed the chapels.
From Romes to hells,

A new beginning.
the dawns arisen.
it was dark.
but now its bright.
My secret room of lite.

Re: My room of lite

Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 12:08 am
by lizzytysh
That's beautiful, Jimbo.

You've been in difficult spaces, unimaginable places; still, you've persevered and I believe that, yes, you can love, again... though, like riding a bicycle after one has fallen off, it won't require so much learning.

You're a brave man with a great spirit 8) . Thank you for sharing yourself with us.


~ Lizzy

Re: My room of lite

Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 12:14 am
by jimbo
Its my pleasure.and thank you for your nice comments.from your beautiful mind.

Re: My room of lite

Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 4:33 pm
by mat james
powerful, simple and clear jimbo.
This is poetry.

Regards, Matj

Re: My room of lite

Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 4:57 pm
by jimbo
Why thank you MatJ