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Fantasy
Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 9:08 pm
by Sandra
If I say
I know you,
is a fantasy,
If I think
I love you,
I imagine things
If I really love you
Is a mystery
if you really love me,
a puzzle for me
when the time is over
of blindness to see
the tree of the dreams
will show reality
Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 2:46 am
by Diane
Hi Sandra,
To me you are expressing the idea that we see what we want to see in each other, and that the "tree" we plant in this dream eventually bears the reality, the fruit, of our relationship. Am I reading you right?
Thanks,
Diane
Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 5:33 am
by Sandra
yes Diane..., my english maybe is not the best......
what I am really trying to say is the difficulty to define real love and as you said
"the "tree" we plant in this dream eventually bears the reality, the fruit,...
yes
Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 1:01 pm
by Diane
Hi Sandra,
Your English is great, and I like the way you have presented the idea. My poetry interpretation skills are sometimes wonky, and that is why I like to check
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Cheers,
Diane