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Poem Dead

Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2003 4:50 pm
by Xavier Keyet
Sick man to hospital
Healthy man drives freeway home to dog
Sick man sicker
Healthy man runs over the dog
Sick man getting worse
Healthy man sad
Sick man dead
Healthy man sick
Dog dead
Healthy man in bad shape
Poem getting worse
Poem dead

Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2003 5:59 pm
by Paula
Well give it a good burial Xaiver I thought it was good.

Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2003 6:07 pm
by lizzytysh
how funny.....the kick-the-dog syndrome from another slant...with a forward and reverse.....did you begin with another intent altogether?

Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2003 7:50 pm
by linmag
Now that sort of poetry I can relate to, Xavier. I love it :)

Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2003 8:55 pm
by paula_hansen
Paula said "Well give it a good burial Xaiver I thought it was good."


good, hmm- about death I notice.