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you captivated me with your smile
in those indian garbs
with the lilac flowers
like raindrops
oh to be back in time with you
those ruby lips
and the scent of musk around you
like the kama sutra
and almond coloured forehead
and the snakes in baskets
and the heat...............
the imagry makes me weep
a fleeting moment in my head to keep
alas, not to be
Georges

I really, really like this.....and I suspect you've expressed the sentiments of many a man. No words seemed anachronistic to what you were going for, and I appreciate that.

~Lizzytysh

This is really good, I like it much, I've been in India, in goa and In Mumbay. And I will go there again.

Thanks, Tomyboy for your comments
Georges