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Posted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 5:45 am
by John K.
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Posted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 7:49 am
by lizzytysh
This is very thoughtful, thought-provoking, circumspect, and real, John. Very good conclusion. I'm not surprized to see that you wrote this.

I hope your neighbour does well, or at least okay, at the hospital.


Love,
Lizzy

Posted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 10:55 pm
by margaret
I understood this as also referring to our neighbours a few thousand miles away.

Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 12:26 am
by lizzytysh
Interesting thought, Margaret... one I hadn't considered [though should have, of course].

~ Lizzy

Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 9:04 pm
by John K.
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Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 11:28 pm
by margaret
Ah yes, I get it now. :(

Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 11:32 pm
by Kush
Awesome. Very imaginative. I didnt quite get it earlier on. And no judgment passed one way or other, just an observation.

p.s. here is my version of the first verse....not that I would have you change a word of it...

I could be sarcastic
Or serious
Or play the fool
perhaps a bit of each
in order to confuse.

Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 7:43 pm
by John K.
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Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 8:59 pm
by Byron
The ambulance arrives as in oftentimes before.
No siren, bell or clamour,
but the still sad music of humanity.




With my thanks to John K, and also a nod to Wordsworth. (Tintern Abbey)