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poem?
Posted: Sat Jul 13, 2002 12:26 am
by peterneedham
Should I write
to say
that I am alone
or should I embrace
this sanctuary
that offers creativity
with no parole?
Peter Needham
Posted: Sat Jul 13, 2002 12:33 am
by lizzytysh
That's interesting questioning, Peter. Forever locked in to creativity?
Lizzytysh
Posted: Sat Jul 13, 2002 12:38 am
by peterneedham
I have my book of poems
I hide behind it
Posted: Sat Jul 13, 2002 12:40 am
by lizzytysh
ahhh....gotcha.
Posted: Sat Jul 13, 2002 12:49 am
by peterneedham
I try to capture
the words for these lines
but there are no guarantees
that they are stolen
from a man
who has sentenced me
to thirty years
of longing
I hear the master sing
but I try to leave
before he goes clear
Sincerely P Needham
Posted: Sat Jul 13, 2002 12:55 am
by lizzytysh
Peter,
Nice blending and adapting of relevant phrases, so as to explain yourself.
~Lizzytysh
Re: poem?
Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2012 2:49 am
by fishfishquaileye
peterneedham wrote:Should I write
to say
that I am alone
or should I embrace
this sanctuary
that offers creativity
with no parole?
Peter Needham
No
Re: poem?
Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 12:04 am
by fishfishquaileye
fishfishquaileye wrote:peterneedham wrote:Should I write
to say
that I am alone
or should I embrace
this sanctuary
that offers creativity
with no parole?
Peter Needham
No
YES!
Re: poem?
Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 7:20 am
by lizzytysh
You're swimming waaaaaaaaay deep into the depths to net these, fishfish