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fall plan
Posted: Mon Apr 24, 2006 10:05 pm
by elazar
unregister for me
flow to sea
then forward onward
east and west
ungripped
untethered
to another monster
Posted: Tue Apr 25, 2006 11:42 am
by Cohen Kid
Very lovely done
I hope I get the symbolic not totally wrong, but is it about a love who's very distant and out of reach... I see it like this: he/she'll move on, into the crowd, a different direction than you, disappearing from sight, into someone else's arms...
But maybe i'm totally wrong... it's nice poetry though... because I can make my own meaning of it... and some poems are too vague and leave me dizzy... Good
Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 3:23 am
by elazar
cohen kid,
thanks for the kind comments. i won't say what it means, but i really like how u read it.
salut
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Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 3:32 am
by dar
Nice to see you elazar. Hope all is well. Your poem reminds me of LC's line about...."dragging your tail in the sea..." You know the Godzilla image...on to another monster? I think I get ya.