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put the title
Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2003 2:07 am
by Sandra
Can you put a title to this poem?
Walking around we are blind
Suddenly
A light blinks in a fan,
spreads out and touch us.
We can see...
The glances meet
It is love......
The light goes nimble,
smiles and moves away
with a mocking grin
To Sandra
Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2003 3:54 am
by George.Wright
Light Laughing Luminate
Georges
thank you
Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2003 4:00 am
by Sandra
I would like to have many titles and see if some matches with the one I already gave to this poem
Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2003 4:33 am
by George.Wright
Awakening?
Georges
Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 2:11 am
by babz
The Light That Blinds
Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 2:31 am
by babz
Perhaps I was too terse.
The reference to 'mocking grin' in the last stanza
gives a flavour of irony to the piece.
And we all know the old cliche: Love is Blind!
So one blindness is traded for another.
but I could be wrong...
and then there was the takeoff on The Tie That Binds
Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 3:09 am
by wilcotree
Helpless
or
Clarity Charity (can't)[/i]
to babz
Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 6:43 pm
by Sandra
Hello !
I dont think you were terse because I had forgotten that "love is blind" and it is true in a sense.....
Interesting thing to know that others dont always catch the real intention the poet had when writing his/her poem.......
the poem´s name
Posted: Wed Jan 22, 2003 7:34 pm
by Sandra
Hello!!!!
Thank you for your answers and sense of humour
I named that poem The transitory