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It's like

Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 2:36 pm
by ~greg
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It's like - gmw
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It's like
There's this tiny little step.
In front of a church,
or a woman, or any other
kind of clarity.

But it isn't at all clear what.
Just this tiny little step

14 cm up
(say the fundamentalist-est
of my women admirers.)

But more accurately:
"Because it's there"
To quote a fellow goat.

It's the step that raises me
Above my ego.

And I'm too old
To even consider it.

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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 6:18 pm
by lizzytysh
A great 'tactile,' visual rendering of a conceptual, 'moral'/'ethical' [until I find the correct word and edit this] dilemma, Greg. As I read through it, I 'get' it 8) but then have difficulty expressing how or why :shock: . Perhaps because it is so simple and universal in its way? Perhaps because we all face that same tiny, 14 cm step in our way? Still, I believe we're never too old to consider anything.

~ Lizzy

Re: It's like

Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 8:21 am
by ania
~greg wrote:.

And I'm too old
To even consider it.

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you dont believe that

Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2006 11:48 pm
by Diane
I like that poem a lot, greg.
"Because it's there"
To quote a fellow goat.
A mountain that is only a small step, to be climbed for 'no reason' ?

I don't like the last two lines, though: they deflate it for me. I think age is a positive thing in the quest.

Diane