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haiku
Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 5:40 pm
by Sandra
robles antiguos
ramas centinelas de
aves que anidan
group of ancient oaks
the black red hummingbird nests
inaudible cloth
(each language is not quite the same idea)
Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 7:07 pm
by lizzytysh
Hi Sandra ~
I like the words you've chosen and the images ~ even though I've yet to put the meaning together. Time...
~ Lizzy
Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 7:44 pm
by Sandra
ok lizzy...I am glad that my post 666 was so nice.
Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 7:50 pm
by lizzytysh
OK, I know that you're not supposed to have to explain a poem ~ however, this is really a pleasant one that I'd like to understand.
Is the inaudible cloth the oaks that are holding the nests and the tiny birds?
Yes ~ for your 666, this was
very nice
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Love,
Lizzy
Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 9:10 pm
by Sandra
yes.....
Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 9:33 pm
by lizzytysh
Oh, good ~ I can rest easy, then....thanks, Sandra
.
Love,
Lizzy