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The Good Person
Posted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 4:14 pm
by Kevin
it's 6:58
the end of the "affair"
and pasttime for tragedy
the "affair"
never earned its gently hugging quotes
I love my idea of you
though we use a different thesaurus
I never expected it to be
anything other than ridiculous
Re: The Good Person
Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2005 10:47 pm
by paula_hansen
Kevin wrote:it's 6:58
the end of the "affair"
and pasttime for tragedy
the "affair"
never earned its gently hugging quotes
I love my idea of you
though we use a different thesaurus
I never expected it to be
anything other than ridiculous
We are All God's Children, even the hopeless and the illiterate.
Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2005 12:26 am
by Kevin
thank you, paula. I would have used 'unlettered' but I see your point.
Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2005 3:53 am
by Fljotsdale
I've read your poem 3 times now. I liked it better every time.
Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2005 10:56 am
by Teratogen
paula, you always seem to find yourself out of place wherever you rear your faith-mongering head. good lord!