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she checks the mirror for the band
i check the mirror for her
slow yet rythmic
revolving and gracefull
she churns her body to the beat
wrapping my imagination around her torso
like yarn
i only glimse a fraction of her coiling preposals
of what that body is capable
i howl at the noice and light
a primal bellow
that can make mountains shudder
enough
all is premeditated
for the situation to be balanced
in ones favor
one must rear a beastly head
declaring
i am a more suitable beast!
me!

Hi Elazar ~

Very graphic . What is this permeating theme of your poems that I sense [read: understatement] ?

Sensual:

slow yet rythmic
revolving and gracefull
she churns her body to the beat
i only glimse a fraction of her coiling preposals

Precisely Descriptive:

a primal bellow
that can make mountains shudder

Primates' Mating Game:
one must rear a beastly head
declaring
i am a more suitable beast!
me!

I enjoyed this a lot, Elazar.

~ Lizzy

elazar wrote:she checks the mirror for the band
i check the mirror for her
slow yet rythmic
revolving and gracefull
she churns her body to the beat
wrapping my imagination around her torso
like yarn
i only glimse a fraction of her coiling preposals
of what that body is capable
i howl at the noice and light
a primal bellow
that can make mountains shudder
enough
all is premeditated
for the situation to be balanced
in ones favor
one must rear a beastly head
declaring
i am a more suitable beast!
me!

The Beast is Satan, he must be destroyed. How do we destroy the Beast, you ask. By Kindness and Loving Acts of Charity. The less you have the more ye shall give, sayeth the Lord.