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Very short indeed
Posted: Sat Dec 07, 2002 2:30 pm
by Laura
With our mouth we measured our love
from head to toe and inside out.
And now we find our love doesn't resist
to a few words wispered by our mouths...
This is just a joke; but I do find it sad when love poems begin to be written with the mind and not the heart.
Laura
To Laura
Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2002 3:21 am
by George.Wright
Love cannot be measured by the tongue
only from the heart
and only when the mind and body depart
Georges
Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2002 4:06 am
by lizzytysh
"....but I do find it sad when love poems begin to be written with the mind and not the heart"....thank you for saying that, Laura.
Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2002 8:57 am
by Vesuvius
Yes, indeed, thank you Laura. Words of wisdom.
Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2002 9:45 pm
by Laura
To Georges:
We hold hands with our minds,
kiss with our hearts
and talk with our bodies.
That's love for me.
I don't like excluding any part of me when it's about love. I wrote that little poem for a love which was deep and honest-but missed the connection between minds-and made me bored and frustrated; and now I'm trying not to fall into a love which has no body-and it's beautiful, but makes me cold. But, I'm running out of topic...
Laura
Posted: Tue Dec 10, 2002 8:03 am
by Vesuvius
Hands, hearts, minds, bodies. Very moving thoughts.