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Ooh I like this very much.

"There are caresses
And smiles
Which do not lie"

I think your first stanza is stronger, but both are equally powerful.

Thanks mate, I'm glad you liked it,






By the way what happened with your poem "Verses of love and mercy"?

I got a small glimpse at it earlier and thought I'd read through it more thoroughly later on, but now it seems you've edited it out