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Posted: **Thu Apr 07, 2005 7:28 pm**

Corrigenda

The red rose,
Lovely yet as loons,
I've wry ball rooms.

Page 126, please supplement:

The bread rose,
Lively yeast moons
Ivory balloons.

Spill dread, whine
Stay and while she eats
Boat victims often cheat.

Page 232, please supplement:

Spilled red wine,
Stained white sheets
Both victims of the heat.

arrividerci,
L

Posted: **Thu Apr 07, 2005 7:57 pm**

my goodness, it's a poem on our poetry forum!

nice one, L. good fun and nice to spend a moment working out the plays.

btw do you think it's time for another poetry comp?

regards

C2

Posted: **Thu Apr 07, 2005 10:22 pm**

Mikee~

Well, pigs flew and hell froze over.......

If others are hot for another poetry comp I'll raise my hand and volunteer to be the Thingy.

Thanks!

L

Posted: **Sat Apr 09, 2005 9:30 am**

Yes, Michael, a poem! And what a well done experimental piece!

Thanks, Laurie, forgiving it to us.

A poetry comp? Why not? Though I probably won't participate this time, since I don't even find the time to finish the poems that wait in my scrap book.

tom

ERRATA
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forgiving
supplement: for giving

Posted: **Sat Apr 09, 2005 8:10 pm**

tom~

HahahahaHa.

please supplement:

Hehehehehe

Thanks for the comments!

L