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At The Concert
Posted: Wed Apr 29, 2015 4:40 pm
by Johnny Goldsmith
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Joined Mar 26, 2015
Re: At The Concert
Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2015 12:24 am
by Cheshire gal
A very well composed poem Johnny, but I find it a little disturbing.
Take away his crayons
Posted: Wed May 06, 2015 8:59 am
by Sideways
"Slight of hand". It's a common decency to your reader to check your spelling. People died for the Right to Spellcheck. Sorry if it would be a "sleight" inconvenience for you. Blunders like that- "Once upon a time this would have been unheard off". Oh, fuck "of", you have done it again. Can you really copyright a total absence of talent or does your c in a circle mean something else, like a cretin performing center stage?
This is a really poorly composed not-a-poem and it is truly disturbing that it exists. You published a line "an aura of something special". You didn't drown it, strangle it, or publicly beat and humiliate it. You decided to publish it. The brilliant alliteration of "something special". Here's a phrase that could catch on and become a cliche that will last 1,000 years or even a millennium. It is so powerfully descriptive, displaying such insight. Your very approach of searching for originality! Let me give it a go, Master
Your not-a-poem has an aura of something shit.
Trolls R Us. You are either forum or againstum.
I'm againstum. Goodbye forum, goodbye Johnny, goodbye for ever.