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To my Goddess, on our first anniversary

Posted: Mon May 26, 2014 7:55 pm
by Mercurio
In my Life I want angels
and above them all is you.
My Goddess is not looking for a Servant or a Slave,
instead I ask her, "let me be your right hand"

And I move my right hand just here,
like this, mmmm like this
I need to sweep your hair away for a moment,
because..I need to sweep your hair away because...

I am going to kiss you. I need to move your hair away because...

I will kill 20 traitors and 47 wholly innocent people because I need to kiss you.
I need to kiss your neck.
There is your neck and here is my need. I know the answer.
Look at me, ask me any question. I know the answer

Did I tell you I need to kiss you?
first I will move your hair away

Special Offer, "For this Lifetime Only",
ask anything of me, Goddess. Here I am.
Do you expect anything more in future?
I'm running late for the past.

I need to sweep your hair away
for a clean start
every day.
I need to kiss you because...

Mercurio

Dedicated to my Goddess, on our First Anniversary. It's hard to believe it's been a whole week already

Re: To my Goddess, on our first anniversary

Posted: Mon May 26, 2014 11:18 pm
by Cate
Over the top of course, but it complementary works.
I hope your lady likes her anniversary poem Mercutio - she's a lucky lady.

Re: To my Goddess, on our first anniversary

Posted: Tue May 27, 2014 1:41 am
by lizzytysh
Do you expect anything more in future?
I'm running late for the past.
LOVE how these two lines work together... and how you've conceptualized into words your last line.