Oh dear!
Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 1:34 am
My dear dear Critic2,
I see you're back with the same vindictiveness.
It's not enough for you to point out possible changes is it? You have to get down and dirty. You have to get obscene.
I can't help but notice that you failed to tell them the most important part of writing, that perhaps they should just experiment.
Is this because you didn't win? Are you hurting? Is this your way of extracting revenge?
I notice that you haven't claimed your poems yet. Why is that?
My dear boy, we're only here to help you.
For all of you that are relatively new to the forum, welcome to the real Critic2! A hurting little child that is reaching out but refuses to accept a hand.
I see you're back with the same vindictiveness.
It's not enough for you to point out possible changes is it? You have to get down and dirty. You have to get obscene.
I can't help but notice that you failed to tell them the most important part of writing, that perhaps they should just experiment.
Is this because you didn't win? Are you hurting? Is this your way of extracting revenge?
I notice that you haven't claimed your poems yet. Why is that?
My dear boy, we're only here to help you.
For all of you that are relatively new to the forum, welcome to the real Critic2! A hurting little child that is reaching out but refuses to accept a hand.