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Poem #24

Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 3:34 am
by Joe Way
Winter's Over


Sidwalk slush drips
Barstool swaying
to the A-minor wail of
discontented notes

Ice cubes melting
Sublimation advertising
drinks for everyone
You pay

The House laughs

Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 7:38 pm
by Joe Way
Hi really liked the contrast between the lush/slush and the ice cubes/winter. Well done.

Joe