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I am a danish songwriter and i just put out an album. I am trying to make my way to the Cohen listener, as I am one my self.
I hope my songs can do some good for the users in this forum. Please let me know what you think.

These are a few sound cloud -links:

"eye for an eyeliner" :
http://soundcloud.com/tracks/search?q%5 ... ration%5D=

"whitney is dead" :
http://soundcloud.com/tracks/search?q%5 ... ration%5D=

Lyrics for "eye for an eyeliner":

Eye For An Eyeliner

Its an eye for an eyeliner, and a tooth for some lipstick
its a horizon for a mirror, its everything within for the skin

And there you go, so distant and beautiful
like a rainbow, like a movie show
There you go, in steam and smoke
like some crazy show boat, with no anchor to throw

What you did to my body that night, It was all in you script
and you did It perfectly right
but to me you were, really nothing but a movie

There you go, so distant and beautiful
like an actress, always working for the show
there you go, so visible
like a diamond
cause you know a diamond is the hardest stone

Its an eye for an eyeliner, and a tooth for some lipstick
Its a horizon for a mirror
Its the worm hand for a stone

A review of my Album (hope you browser can translate):
http://gaffa.dk/search/artist/15791/

If you want, you can listen to the album on spotify. Just type "Rasmus Olsen".

Best regards Rasmus

Good luck with your album Rasmus. I liked both songs and sought ought some more.
You own style for sure but that kind of sweet slow sound is very Cohenesc … a bit of quirky humour in there as well.