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In the late summer

Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2012 7:33 pm
by peter danielsen
As we together roll naked across the wet lawn
your long chaotic hair is whirled around
like sea grass released
in a mighty tidal wave
I have a firm grip on your buttocks
that you will never again disappear
when the flag salutes the starless blue late summer sky

Re: In the late summer

Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 1:30 pm
by Byron
This reminds me very much of the myth of the Selkie.
The imagery is strong.
Thanks. :)

Re: In the late summer

Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 7:54 pm
by Cate
I like the image Peter - it seems dreamlike

not to date myself but the rolling across the lawn reminds me of xtc's grass ... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ozu8KGFH-CU