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Who Am I
Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2012 8:54 am
by elazar
Who Am I
waking up to cold remorse
stiff movements chart the coarse
effort met halfway
broken strides bury the day
swept forward in midst of the swarm
reflective suggestive a common norm
I fear most before I die
I'll blink and say who am I
Salut
Elazar
Re: Who Am I
Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2012 10:00 am
by fishfishquaileye
You are a "common Norm". Do I win?
Re: Who Am I
Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2012 4:47 pm
by elazar
Yes. Select your prize
Re: Who Am I
Posted: Sat Feb 04, 2012 2:59 am
by fishfishquaileye
elazar wrote:Yes. Select your prize
Norm! Cheers!
Re: Who Am I
Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 8:08 pm
by elazar
fishfishquaileye wrote: Norm! Cheers!
So Brave! So Sweet!
Re: Who Am I
Posted: Fri Feb 24, 2012 4:48 pm
by Dennis Dwight Baker
"I" is attached to reason/individual as "I AM" is attached to spirit/faith.
Who "AM I" and Who "I AM" walk together.
Re: Who Am I
Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2012 7:05 pm
by elazar
Interesting, Dennis... sounds like the "perfect" balance I've been searching for all this time! Well done!
Re: Who Am I
Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 4:03 pm
by lizzytysh
"I" is attached to reason/individual as "I AM" is attached to spirit/faith.
Who "AM I" and Who "I AM" walk together.
A simple and concise reduction. I really enjoyed that, and especially conjunct elazar's poem.