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Late late entry section
Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 3:28 pm
by Critic2
deleted message
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 12:26 am
by Seedy
I thought this might be the right place unless it is too late!
Taxi turns away from Hotel Freedom
Alone with a suitcase in his hand
He wanders of to his room
Long curtains in a misty dirty tan
Hangs like lost lovers drawn apart
Cheap grey toiletpaper and two towels
In folded shape for a luxury look
No sewing kit, no bathing cap
But loneliness creeping out of the walls
He checks the minibar and bed
The smell of sex hangs in the room
But the room is cold and empty
We hope you will enjoy your stay
Please leave the room before ten
The TV welcomes him as Ms Smith
Hotel Freedom is abandon and deserted
From arrivings and the leavings
The short relation, the sneaking ones
The married couple trying to remake
The seedy hotel far beyond it’s prime
Seedy Conzales
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 12:53 pm
by Seedy
LIZZYTYSH!!!!!!!
Where are you??????????????
seedy
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 1:02 pm
by Critic2
had you kept to your reservation time, this entry would deffo.now be luxuriating in some winners' circle or other
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 2:21 pm
by Seedy
oh my!!!
Does this mean I will NOT win a box of muffins????
seedy
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:01 pm
by lizzytysh
Hi Seedy Conzales ~
Sorry. I had my nose in the book, luxuriating in your poem. Welcome to the Forum
. Love your punny name.
~ Lizzy
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:11 pm
by Seedy
Thank you Lizzttysh, and yes I love it too - much more than my former name which you will have to run a guess at
seedy
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 7:25 pm
by Critic2
"box of muffins", isn't it impressive how that thread has run for so long. I want to thank the person who started it. You're welcome.
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 8:24 pm
by Seedy
Started by Partisan 10.dec. 2002, Comments & questions, Forum Members
partisan wrote:I do believe some of you may be unaware that there is a FREE BOX OF HOT MUFFINS to everyone who VOTES FOR ME! Now this should not be seen as bribery, rather an expression of gratitude for this kind show of support. Please do not ask for the muffins before voting, that WOULD be bribery, and I have high moral standards to maintain.
Happy Voting,
p.
Still want to thank the muffin-maker?
Seedy
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 8:32 pm
by lizzytysh
Dear Seedy ~
Haven't you noticed how terrible I am at guessing games? I couldn't even identify ~
for-sure for sure! ~ my dear friend, Helven's, poem
!
Okay ~ Are you
Helven!?! 
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 8:41 pm
by Seedy
Lizzytysh!
Use your brains - can Helven write poetry like me? - I think NOT!
Seedy
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 8:58 pm
by lizzytysh
Well, then,
Welcome to the Late Entry section,
Martine ! You still got that
smell thing goin' on! Or, maybe it's me [since I did mention "stench"
]!
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 9:13 pm
by Seedy
Lizzytysh oh Lizzytysh!
You wouldn't even be able to smell a wet dog right next to you
Seedy not Martini
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 9:18 pm
by lizzytysh
LOL ~ My most accurate, intuitive insights come when I'm not trying ~ when they just happen! OK ~ I give! "Uncle!" Who th' hell are ya'
. Critic2? Addressing you formally
.
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 9:23 pm
by Seedy
Givin' up so soon?
Call the FBI or even better the C.I.A.
Seedy