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Was this one deleted?

Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 3:15 pm
by StrangerY
sat down with my lover
who has a monopoly of my affection
we played for hours
acquiring toy wealth
and as the hours passed
with the game poised
between jail and riches
our budgie got impatient
for his dinner
and in an act of bird-brained revenge
spilt the contents of his cage
all over the board
leaving me
with a seedy hotel

Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 3:43 pm
by StrangerY
came 3rd, hadn't noticed. apologies, Judge.

Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 4:16 pm
by lizzytysh
In fact, StrangerY, it was mentioned in conjunction with the Grand Prize "VivaVinyl" one regarding wordplays. [Geesh :roll: ! Where you been :lol: ?]

Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 4:16 pm
by NEHOC
No, Critic2, but it should have been.

Perhaps you can rework it for the next contest.