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Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 3:04 pm
by Martine
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Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 3:06 pm
by Critic2
it is quite extraordianary that this didn't win!
Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 3:08 pm
by Martine
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Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 3:43 pm
by Paula
Martine this was the only poem that I immediately knew who had entered it. You wuz robbed (not really)

Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 3:47 pm
by Martine
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Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 4:13 pm
by lizzytysh
Somehow, Leonard just never came to mind when I read it

~ "Pooh what a whiff" ~ now, Leonard definitely has a nature that's genteel, but aligning that line with him was just a conceptual leap I wasn't prepared to make, with the label "Leonardesque"

~ creative, however, yes

. It was
all of that! What I'm
happiest about is your
wonderful attitude

!!! I appreciate, and I'm
certain Laurie does

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~ Lizzy
Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 4:51 pm
by NEHOC
Somehow, Leonard just never came to mind when I read it ~ "Pooh what a whiff" ~ now, Leonard definitely has a nature that's genteel, but aligning that line with him was just a conceptual leap I wasn't prepared to make, with the label "Leonardesque"
Let me disabuse you of that notion. "Pooh what a whiff" is quite tame compared to what appeared on the "Notebook" pages of the Sony site. I have a difficult time listening to Closing Time knowing that Leonard had problems with his stool and had to use Preparation H while he was writing that song. His nature is not as genteel as you imagine.
Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 5:06 pm
by lizzytysh

~ Even with those particular issues, it would be difficult to imagine the words "Pooh what a whiff" coming forth. I don't quite make the connection between gentility and use of Preparation H as being polar opposites, or even in the least bit contradictory. My point, of course, would require that you come with something even
more 'genteel' than "Pooh what a whiff," if your intent is to dispute. I'm certain he
did use words less fluffy on his pages

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