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Not posted anything remotely serious for a while, and this one’s way out of my comfort zone, but somehow my usual little rhymes can’t express the depth of my feelings. But then again, maybe some feelings can’t be put into words?

I need to tell you…

I can’t remember how it happened… or when,
I just know you turned my world on its axis.
I’d like to think that I’m still in control…
but that choice is out of my hands.
My head is no longer at the helm,
my heart steers this ship.

It’s hard to comprehend the things I’m feeling.
You hold my heart so tightly in your hand
that I just have to trust you not to break it,
but I am willing to take that chance.
This time there is no going back
I belong to you.

My body aches for you and you fill my mind
with lustful thoughts and unbearable longings.
I want to feel your skin touching mine,
not for a short time but always.
I long to turn over and you are there…
maybe one day soon?

I hunger for your love and your devotion,
and yearn to feel your warm and loving touch.
I enjoy the gentle rhythm of your body
as you fulfil my fantasies
and I satisfy your every need…
my body is yours.

I want to tell you what you mean to me…
but there are no words that can convey my thoughts.
The words ‘I love you’ seem inadequate
to show the depth of my feelings,
they may sound worn out and over used
but they‘re all I have!

Karren B
xx

Such passion - mmmmmmm

Would love to hear you say those words

Very beautiful, passionate words, Karren, and obviously spoken from the heart.
A very lucky guy!

geoff+evans wrote:Such passion - mmmmmmm

Would love to hear you say those words

Thank you for your kind words Geoff...but there is only one man who can extract those words from my lips!

Redrivershore said.
Very beautiful, passionate words, Karren, and obviously spoken from the heart.
A very lucky guy!

Thanks Red, but maybe i'm the lucky one.

Karren B
xx

What a beautiful piece Karren
May I add a sentiment-
............
Sacred naked flesh
Taking passion
in to flight
in the night
To go
Where it might ..........

On a less serious note Karren, I dont think this is 'a thigh boots and whip moment '


And here is a song that your words invoked a memory of

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-dVwhZ5GN_E

Thanks for your comments lonndubh...

Love the John Denver song, never heard it before but will add it to my you tube favourites...Have also sent it to a certain Irishman I know!

Definitely not a thigh boots and whip moment...well I have to give him a rest sometimes!

Karren B
xx

this is nice Karren and as already mentioned very passionate.
I like the sense of submission - the fully embracing of what ever it is that love is.
someone must be very special to be loved in such a way.

Thanks for your comments cate, as you know not my usual style and a bit out of my comfort zone but i think it said what i wanted it to say.

cate wrote
someone must be very special to be loved in such a way.

He is!...

Karren B
xx