Ding....ding.....dong....dong
The sun shone
All day long
Ding...ding...dong...dong.
Good poetry part 2
Good poetry part 2
Manchester 19th June/Cardiff 8th Nov
Re: Good poetry part 2
I will have to come back to this kwillskwills wrote:Ding....ding.....dong....dong
The sun shone
All day long
Ding...ding...dong...dong.
Its amazing !!!!!!!!!
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Re: Good poetry part 2
WOW...
Keep coming back to this kwills, It's so deep... totally amazing!
Always thought you were a genius!!!!!
Karren B
xx
Keep coming back to this kwills, It's so deep... totally amazing!
Always thought you were a genius!!!!!
Karren B
xx
'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
Re: Good poetry part 2
Ah lonndubh and Karren B,thank you so much for your sincere compliments I always knew you two had great taste in poetry.
I do like the way in which the dings and the dongs stretch out at the beginning and end of the poem it gives it a sense of atmosphere don't you think?
In fact I have a confession to make,while I was busy composing this enthralling and thought provoking poem,I must admit to have being influenced by none other than the great poet,yes I'm sure you have guessed who it is, Bald Rick. To be even more honest with you I am related to this highly intelligent man with the cunning mind but only distantly.He certaintly helped getting old Black Ladder out of a few scrapes or two.
I'm feeling rather generous at the moment so, if you wish it of course, I can send you my autograph.Just pm me your addresses and I will let you know where to send the self addressed envelope with postage and I will give you a signed photograph of myself! There, can't get any better than that can it?
P.S You haven't seen Yorkshire Lad around anywhere have you? he mooned at me the last time I wrote great poem part one! I tell you he needs to shave that bum!
I do like the way in which the dings and the dongs stretch out at the beginning and end of the poem it gives it a sense of atmosphere don't you think?
In fact I have a confession to make,while I was busy composing this enthralling and thought provoking poem,I must admit to have being influenced by none other than the great poet,yes I'm sure you have guessed who it is, Bald Rick. To be even more honest with you I am related to this highly intelligent man with the cunning mind but only distantly.He certaintly helped getting old Black Ladder out of a few scrapes or two.
I'm feeling rather generous at the moment so, if you wish it of course, I can send you my autograph.Just pm me your addresses and I will let you know where to send the self addressed envelope with postage and I will give you a signed photograph of myself! There, can't get any better than that can it?
P.S You haven't seen Yorkshire Lad around anywhere have you? he mooned at me the last time I wrote great poem part one! I tell you he needs to shave that bum!
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Manchester 19th June/Cardiff 8th Nov
Re: Good poetry part 2
oh yes... it has a bit of a hypnotic rhythm to it as well.I do like the way in which the dings and the dongs stretch out at the beginning and end of the poem it gives it a sense of atmosphere don't you think?
Re: Good poetry part 2
Yes Cate! that's exactly how it was meant to sound..hypnotic you hit the nail on the head!Cate wrote:oh yes... it has a bit of a hypnotic rhythm to it as well.I do like the way in which the dings and the dongs stretch out at the beginning and end of the poem it gives it a sense of atmosphere don't you think?
Look into my ding ...dongs...look into my ding...dongs...look intzzzzzzzzzzz
Manchester 19th June/Cardiff 8th Nov
Re: Good poetry part 2
I guessed straight away Kwillskwills wrote:I must admit to have being influenced by none other than the great poet,yes I'm sure you have guessed who it is, Bald Rick. To be even more honest with you I am related to this highly intelligent man with the cunning mind but only distantly.
While I would love the autograph kwills I am a little afraid of sending my address to you in case you come here and start some of yourkwills wrote:I'm feeling rather generous at the moment so, if you wish it of course, I can send you my autograph.Just pm me your addresses and I will let you know where to send the self addressed envelope with postage and I will give you a signed photograph of myself! There, can't get any better than that can it?
Very dangerous !!Look into my ding ...dongs...look into my ding...dongs...look intzzzzzzzzzzz