I am so very proud of this...
Posted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 12:08 am
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.....And not a profane word in sight 
I like it
.~ Lizzytysh
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Posted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 1:37 am
.....And not a profane word in sight I like it
.~ Lizzytysh
Posted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 1:50 am
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Posted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 5:36 am
I rather like its passive stance of awaiting that affirmation.
The endorsement that's so essential. You know the one. I'd leave it as is. A nice contrast to the active voice.
~ Lizzy
The endorsement that's so essential. You know the one. I'd leave it as is. A nice contrast to the active voice.
~ Lizzy
Posted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 7:40 am
Even as a troll poem this is awful. When such obvious joke verse is posted to the alt.art.poetry.comments newsgroup it draws no response. Trolling has to be subtle enough or clever enough to fool the reader. No-one would believe this took more than 5 minutes to write.
Posted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 1:11 pm
Brava Martine!
You laid the bait, and he took it! Well done!
Egos like that one are so easy to lure aren't they?
~ Makera
You laid the bait, and he took it! Well done!
Egos like that one are so easy to lure aren't they?
~ Makera
Posted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 3:24 pm
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Posted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 7:50 pm
thank you ever so much for your caring advice. Meantime would you be kind enough to tell me what gives you the biggest thrill from posting junk verse
tricking Lizzy
immediately being called by me as a dull troll,
or
getting applause from the recidivist Queen of Importance.
Also explain the "status" system to me please. Is it something that matters to you a lot? There are of course other forums where you could troll without needing to pretend you can write.
tricking Lizzy
immediately being called by me as a dull troll,
or
getting applause from the recidivist Queen of Importance.
Also explain the "status" system to me please. Is it something that matters to you a lot? There are of course other forums where you could troll without needing to pretend you can write.
Posted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 11:33 pm
Critic2, I thought You were leaving, are you not???
Time you were.
Georges
Time you were.
Georges
Posted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 11:43 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2004 3:13 am
Hey, Martine, did you also notice 'C2 little' was too thick to comprehend Lizzy's meaning in her last post? Who was really "tricked"?!
I even thought for a minute there she may have blown the cover...
How silly of me! It'd take a brick to his head!
Anyone got a brick handy?
'No one is to blow anyone's whistle until they're stoned'....er, or something like that.
~ Makera
I even thought for a minute there she may have blown the cover...
How silly of me! It'd take a brick to his head!
Anyone got a brick handy?
'No one is to blow anyone's whistle until they're stoned'....er, or something like that.
~ Makera
Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2004 9:57 am
M & M, my two little chocolate drops, thank you for your continuing,albeit feeble, attempts to entertain me. I guess the most important thing is that you continue to play with yourselves.
Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2004 12:58 pm
Ooh! he's having kinky fantasies now! 
Aaaw, poor thing, just so infatuated he can't help himself...
Aaaw, poor thing, just so infatuated he can't help himself...
Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2004 1:07 pm
"Ooh! he's having kinky fantasies now."
True. The idea of my two little chocolate drops melting into dark sticky sludge, mmmmmmmm......
True. The idea of my two little chocolate drops melting into dark sticky sludge, mmmmmmmm......
Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2004 1:21 pm
You are such a dirtbird, Critic2!!
Is this how you get your rocks off??
Is this how you get your rocks off??