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Ren
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Hideous

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Animal Lover
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Re: Hideous

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Ren wrote:She's hideous
And he's hideous
So they cancell each other out
And they both think it's bliss.

and their life is 'ell
like double 'ell
as in your novel word
"cancell"
lonndubh
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Re: Hideous

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Ren wrote:She's hideous
And he's hideous
So they cancell each other out
And they both think it's bliss.
She is great
He is great
Once full of prate
Now No spake :(
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Animal Lover
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Re: Hideous

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Ren's rhyme is crap
unlike rap
should be hideous
from our sighteous
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