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carol smoke

The first follower
wished to close
the question of compulsion
enriching the horizon
like a glass tunnel

applicable if the world is right

and the shapes of the walls come down
of infestation in your hand
I start with the bills after all
I see me this is real
the words fall from your prayers
into open awareness
You see this is not really
and are moving on wild waters
In the dark of the heavenly waterfall

quaileyedsnowfish wrote:carol smoke

The first follower
wished to close
the question of compulsion
enriching the horizon
like a glass tunnel

applicable if the world is right

and the shapes of the walls come down
of infestation in your hand
I start with the bills after all
I see me this is real
the words fall from your prayers
into open awareness
You see this is not really
and are moving on wild waters
In the dark of the heavenly waterfall

You see this is not real
and you are moving on wild waters
in the dark of the heavenly waterfall


.. with a few adjustments, I like this passage..

I feel like this sometimes..

It's to be thrown back onto one's aloneness, where the only gauge you have is how you "feel" about things.. which is no doubt faulty, at times..

.. but perhaps one fine tunes one's perceptions if one is careful about it.

In the end, though.. it can be rather lonely.

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