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Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 12:09 pm
by Lita
Why must I always love the men who sing the blues?
Sad, broke and unavailable yet I still pursue.
Many happy men have danced at my door
But
No
Drama
in
Their
Lives
Makes
Happy
Men
a
Bore
Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 2:28 pm
by Arno
nice lita, next time you come to Munich you let me know, ok?
take care,
Arno
Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2004 12:28 am
by Paula
There is a lot of truth in that Lita
Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2004 2:32 am
by lizzytysh
~ I've always wondered how [many] men feel that way about women. You've expressed that phenomena very well, with appropriate emphasis using the form you chose to do it.
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2004 9:10 am
by Natalie
Lita,
I like your poem. I think it is really cool how the monosyllables create the profile of a man -- a man who has a pot belly and is boring.
I concur with your sentiments. I've dated men who totally have it together and it's like, "yawn."
Whereabouts in BC are you? I live in Victoria.
Great poem!
Natalie
