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Depths of Despair

Posted: Tue May 25, 2004 4:36 pm
by George.Wright
And the pain and the fears, come from deep within your mind
and the white whale dives deep past crystalized ice and strange mysterys, it does find
primitive urges and memories, before the change from the ape
pineal hormones and the forbidden juices from the forbidden grapes
and the monkeys of the desolate sit with sharpened razors, over there
cutting their blood in fits of rages and downright utter despair
and the devils of possession foam rabidly at the mouth
while the horned one himself, faces the collective audience to due south
and you scream the silent anger, of the echo of the soul
like a fierce raging wild beast, caught in a hunter's trap hole
the adrenalin does flow and your veins are gorged with blood
and the white horse goes kicking, kicking in the subconcious mud
and the tears do flow and flow, like a magical childrens waterfall
and the prostitutes of passion exposed, do give your tongue a lashing
and the whips do sting and alarm and cause the bells to ring
sitting in your corner, in a white safe padded room
with your arms crossed over and tied, to stop you harming, i assume
and you melt, you melt into the corner of the creamy soft cell
mysteries and scheming whilst gazing vainly at your reflection, in the white narcissus well.
Georges

Copyright:George Wright 2004

Posted: Tue May 25, 2004 5:00 pm
by peter danielsen
Hi george

Nice one. I suspect the 'you' in this text will recieve his peace in the moment his despair is released in visions of burning countries and weeping children.

Greetings

Peter

Posted: Tue May 25, 2004 5:01 pm
by witty_owl
George, a compelling portrait of the "21 century schizoid man". A portrait of the human in deep despair. A portrait of the inevitable consequence of a human living one's life in denial of this perennial problem that is staring us in the face.
Strong writing.

Regards, owl.

Posted: Tue May 25, 2004 5:35 pm
by George.Wright
Thanks, Peter and Witt.
At times, i have been there.
Best Regards......Georges

Posted: Wed May 26, 2004 2:48 pm
by Vesuvius
Ciao George!


This was very powerful.



Vesuvius

Posted: Wed May 26, 2004 3:21 pm
by George.Wright
Thanks Ves for your encouragement. I appreciate this.
Georges