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salt lick

Posted: Sun May 09, 2004 3:51 am
by ilang
salt lick

tomorrow will never know
how soon I had to leave
todays request of loneliness denied
and you fell gently to your knees

while we laughed at our lost G-ds shame
dancing naked in our sleep
He licked our salty, broken backs
then turned to start and weep

after our love when we collapsed
onto our bedroom floor
we looked at Him and softly asked
please lick us there once more


peace
ISL

Posted: Mon May 10, 2004 6:34 am
by lizzytysh
Very sensual expression, Ilang. I also like the way you've looked at time:
tomorrow will never know
how soon I had to leave