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Summer
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 3:54 am
by drzoidberg
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Re: Summer
Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 2:14 pm
by Cate
I really liked this and have come back a couple times to re-read. It's lite and sweet but not saccharine.
"The color that is you
Is my favorite color
Your smile is like the wind."
somebody is very lucky to be appreciated in such a way.
Re: Summer
Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 7:21 pm
by Alsiony
How beautifully and wonderfully written - I like this so much.
Thanks
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Re: Summer
Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 6:16 am
by Cate
I'm sorry that you removed your poems - I had liked this one quite a bit.
Re: Summer
Posted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 10:26 pm
by Yorkshire Lad
Hi Drzoidberg
I do not know the reason why you removed your poem and I never got the chance to read it . All I know is you should never be afraid to express your feelings publicly . Each and everyone of us has the right to freedom of expression but if we exercise that right we should be aware that it could attract critisism whether justified or not . Poetry like music is a personnel thing and so long as you are sincere in your writing you should let the world judge. As long as your work gives YOU pleasure that is all that matters . Please carry on posting your poems and you will find that you become a stronger person for doing so
Best Wishes
Yorkshire Lad